Who Shot Hikari?

I've had this idea for a little while but I'm not sure if I should go through with this. Please tell me what you think.

The main idea is this: Hikari Yagami was found murdered by locals one morning. Local police investigate but there are no leads; finally, a renowned detective is brought in on the case because the manner of death resembles that of a similar murder. As the investigation goes on, secrets come out.

Characters:

Hikari, the seemingly innocent and popular resident of Odaiba who is found murdered by a jogger. She was one of the nicest peope in town and had a seemingly perfect lifestyle so who would want to kill her?

Takeru, Hikari's boyfriend. He is the town Golden Boy and is deeply in love with Hikari. Or is he?

Ken, a sensitive loner and biker. Has a secret connection with Hikari.

Sora, the detective assigned to Hikari's case though she is at risk for too much emotional inovlment considering she was raised by the Yagamis when her family became too unstable. Is really close with the victim's brother...

Taichi, Hikari's brother and soccer player. His sister's murder brings him back to his old town and he resolves to take a break from playing until Hikari's murderer is brought to justice. He's a bit of a play boy but is extremely close to his childhood friend Sora.

Mimi, the brilliant dective brought in to solve Hikari's murder. She is very eccentric which concerns her fellow detectives and the townspeople. Has an uncanny knack for understanding/reading people.

Yamato, Takeru's brother. He is a rags-to-riches story in the town. He owns several popular clubs in diffrent cities. Once he sets himself to a goal he is nearly impossible to stop.

That's all I got so far. There'll be some couples but the only ones I can really reveal without using spoilers are Taiora and Mimato. There's going to be a lot more though.

It's kind of a mystery but it's more about how well people can truly know each other and what kind of secrets could they have.

COOL!
You should so do this! I'll definatley read it!

This seems very interesting.
- strokes invisible beard -
I'll read.

Me likes! I hope you do work on this. I'm excited.

Sorta reminds me of Leather and Lace by Emerald-Kisses, but I doubt it will be anything like that.

This sounds really good! I'll be looking forward to it!

That reminds me a little of Too Into You! I love stories like that! Can't wait to read it!!

Hey, I hadn't thought of it like that! now I'm even more anxious to read it!

I posted the story today. It's called All These Things That I've Done if you're all still interested.

No one probably cares but, I write to playlists for stories. So I'm going to post the songs on my playlist for this story; these are only the songs relating to the first two chapters (because they're the only two I have posted)

So here goes:

"All These Things That I've Done," The Killers (general theme for the story)
"Hear You Me," Jimmy Eat World (when Hikari's body was found)
"Bad Things," Jace Everett (when the reader finds out what killer did to Hikari)
"Your Guardian Angel," Red Jumpsuit Aparatus (Sora's theme)
"Help!," The Beatles (Mimi's phone call to Sora)

I'll put up more of the playlist as the story goes on.

Caitlin!!!

I do the same thing!

You should hear the Lockdown one... it's creepy.

I have to read this! I can't believe I didn't see it when you posted it...

PrincessJaded wrote:

Caitlin!!!

I do the same thing!

You should hear the Lockdown one... it's creepy.

Sounds fun. Do you have a link?

It's on my iPod.

Sorry, no link.

Now I'm interested in the Lockdown playlist.

Is it a lot of heavy metal? That's what I was listening to when I read it.

Hollywood Undead too..

So am I completly off on my guesses, Diane?

NO!

I love Hollywood Undead!

Hollywood Undead is awesome.

I think my favorites from them are No. 5 and Undead.

Edit: I'll post my Lockdown playlist in the Music section!