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::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 2387
Age : 34
Location : In Your Heart, and Yours, and Yours! Oh, and Yours too!
Registration date : 2009-01-05
| Subject: Date Night  Wed Jun 03, 2009 3:52 am | |
| I decided to ask opinions before I went forward with this one. I like it but the more and more I stare at it... idk. If I do go through with it I won't be writing it until after Lockdown and 1:18 are complete.
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Ken, Yolei, Kari, TK, and Davis are in the car at the drive-in. It's supposed to be couples' night but of course Davis tags along.
It start off where he's babbling on about spending time with Izzy and watching Star Wars. Eventually Yolei gets annoyed because Davis is interrupting makeout time. (Really? Who wouldn't, right?) She tells him to leave and he does... all emotional because he has no one (no it will not be Davis-bashing!).
So he's all alone, walking home in the dark... when suddenly...
Ken wakes up the next morning to a call from Jun frantically asking if he knows where Davis is.
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I think it's safe to assume it would be Suspense, and maybe horror or just drama.
So... what do you think?
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Potgenie
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 2058
Age : 34
Location : Tropical Goodness.
Registration date : 2009-01-04
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 4:39 am | |
| I know I've said it before... but this has got potential!! I think Suspense has to be my favourite genre now!  | |
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ARCtheElite
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 1595
Age : 33
Location : My bed.
Registration date : 2009-01-07
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:00 am | |
| Watching Star Wars? How can I say no? | |
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D
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 2387
Age : 34
Location : In Your Heart, and Yours, and Yours! Oh, and Yours too!
Registration date : 2009-01-05
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:03 am | |
| Thanks Genie! You'll be my beta right? And Matt, that was inspired by you!  | |
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Potgenie
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 2058
Age : 34
Location : Tropical Goodness.
Registration date : 2009-01-04
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 8:49 am | |
| Sure I'll be your beta! Can't wait to read it! | |
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Na-cat
::DigiDestined::
Number of posts : 998
Age : 31
Location : La belle France!
Registration date : 2008-09-05
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:44 pm | |
| Sounds pretty intriguing, depends what you do with it , of course. But you've captured my interest!
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smile-in-ur-sleep
::Champion::
Number of posts : 694
Age : 31
Location : Six feet under the stars.
Registration date : 2008-09-06
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 9:48 pm | |
| This seems totally worth writing!
Go for it! I want to see what happens next. I'm already in suspense! | |
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Aana
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Number of posts : 2312
Age : 32
Registration date : 2008-09-05
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 10:34 pm | |
| I think you should try fit some horror in there... But yeah, like all your ideas it sounds lush! | |
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Tippy
::In-Training::
Number of posts : 231
Location : Of the coast of France
Registration date : 2009-05-11
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:45 pm | |
| I love the ideas!  | |
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D
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 2387
Age : 34
Location : In Your Heart, and Yours, and Yours! Oh, and Yours too!
Registration date : 2009-01-05
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:49 pm | |
| Sounds like a plan! And Aana, I'll add some horror... just for you! | |
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smile-in-ur-sleep
::Champion::
Number of posts : 694
Age : 31
Location : Six feet under the stars.
Registration date : 2008-09-06
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:29 am | |
| If you need help with morbidity, just ask. ^.^ | |
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ARCtheElite
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 1595
Age : 33
Location : My bed.
Registration date : 2009-01-07
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:28 am | |
| If you need extra gore.... | |
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D
::Ultimate::
Number of posts : 2387
Age : 34
Location : In Your Heart, and Yours, and Yours! Oh, and Yours too!
Registration date : 2009-01-05
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:35 am | |
| Lol. Thanks for the offers. My sick and twisted mind is capable, but should I need help... I'll ask!  | |
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Catching Rain
::Champion::
Number of posts : 820
Age : 31
Location : Planet AWESOME!
Registration date : 2009-04-20
| | Subject: Re: Date Night Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:22 am | |
| You should totally do this! | |
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