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PostSubject: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeSun May 31, 2009 6:28 pm

Uh, so this is essentially a few months late.

But I figured today was a good day to sit down and write it, so here it is (finally).

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Blue by emotionless-robot




Blue, blue skies.

That was all Davis really cared about at the moment. Standing on his balcony, looking down at the streets below (and the sky above), he unconsciously decided that today was most definitely a soccer-playing day.

It didn't take long for him to rustle up the rest of his friends, and soon they were jaunting along the streets, heading towards the park to play and hang out for a while, just the six of them together.

Davis tossed the ball in the air over and over again, catching it every time. TK and Kari were behind him, asking Cody about his schooling for the upcoming year. Ken walked silently, listening to everyone’s inane babbling and smiling slightly to himself. Yolei mindlessly chattered in front of Davis, no doubt under the impression that he was listening. Davis’s internal voice snickered, but he was in too good of a mood to completely ignore his purple-haired friend like he would on most days.

Davis felt like now that summer had officially begun, the entire world was his for the taking. After almost a year of being a Digidestined, Davis was… happier. He knew that not everything was perfect—his school grades could testify to that—but he also knew that as long as there were days like this with blue, blue skies and friends of infinite valour, nothing could go wrong.

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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeSun May 31, 2009 7:05 pm

That was like, an image of bliss or something.

Oh and this line:
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Yolei mindlessly chattered in front of Davis, no doubt under the impression that he was listening.

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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeSun May 31, 2009 7:35 pm

That was just beautiful, really <3

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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 3:30 am

That was really good! And this line made me snicker:

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He knew that not everything was perfect—his school grades could testify to that

Tee hee. Nice job!
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 3:40 am

It does fit the picture really well! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 5:57 pm

It's really pretty. Nice images.
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 9:53 pm

It sounded pretty. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:29 pm

That was wonderfully written. A beautiful little drabble about the Chosen's happy summer days. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:29 pm

What, no long review? You're getting lazy...
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:39 pm

Alyss that was sweet. Very Happy

(Though Onii-chan, I have to agree with Matt.)
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:39 pm

Rolling Eyes

Blue is a wonderful title, and along with the first few sentences creates some very wonderful imagery. Blue skies are clear and peaceful, and that's exactly what your story presents us with. And with Daisuke being the main character, what better day is a soccer-day than the blue bright and sunny day like this one? It's just perfect to choose him for the center of this narrative.

Miyako chatting up Daisuke while walking ahead of him is really cute. Even cuter is the fact that he's not paying attention and she doesn't even notice (possibly doesn't even mind). Hehe, it just goes to show that the nice little friendship the Chosen share. They can talk about random things like schooling, not really pay attention to each other fully, or just walk along with smiles on their faces, and they're still all just happy being friends and just generally being together. Smile

And a nice conclusion by Daisuke at the end there. He's happy as long as the Chosen are together like this on such a beautiful day, and that's all that really matters.
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:40 pm

LMFAO!!!
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:43 pm

Yay! Darko's back! (though it was more an analysis than a review...)
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 10:45 pm

*bow* (It was a review, darnit! Let's see your lengthy one now. ;p)
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 11:33 pm

Um... well thanks anyways XD

I appreciate it all (short or otherwise)!

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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeMon Jun 01, 2009 11:35 pm

Arc didn't even leave a short one. No appreciation for him!

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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeTue Jun 02, 2009 3:14 am

I was going to put this a few hours ago, but I had to leave for a concert...

My dear Onii-sama/Otouto, long reviews are your specialty. My main job here is to counter Diane's ego inflation.

Plus, it doesn't really mean anything if I just write "it was a nice story".
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeTue Jun 02, 2009 3:19 am

ARCtheElite wrote:
My dear Onii-sama

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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeTue Jun 02, 2009 3:23 am

Onii-sama refers to your "real world" age, while Otouto refers to your "pretend" age.
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeTue Jun 02, 2009 3:24 am

ARCtheElite wrote:
My main job here is to counter Diane's ego inflation.


HEY! I've been good! Be nice!
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeTue Jun 02, 2009 3:26 am

That's why I'm on standby.
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeTue Jun 02, 2009 3:34 am

Well, my dear Matthew, you asked for a long review from me and I complied. Now I say it's your turn. ^_^

And don't worry about Imouto. Her ego is easily deflatable. ;-)
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PostSubject: Re: One:: Blue   One:: Blue Icon_minitimeWed Jun 03, 2009 10:08 pm

Come on guys, try and stay on topic!

Appreciate Alyss' genius!

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