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PostSubject: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Sat May 09, 2009 2:36 am

Author's Notes: Well, here goes. My first attempt to write something in weeks. The inspiration from this story and its name come from a French song called Quelqu'un M'a Dit which translates into Somebody Told Me. I can post the whole translated song somewhere if you like; the song is about someone who was told that her ex-boyfriend is still in love with her but she's not sure if that's possible. It's a very pretty song if you want to listen to it.

This is also my first attempt at a conversation-only story. Mimi and Tai are having a conversation. God, this is probably going to be crappy.

Couple:Michi. Kind of.

"You okay?"

"Yeah, Tai, I'm just peachy. Impending doom really puts a smile on my face and a bounce in my step."

"You're getting blood drawn, Meems. Not being put the death."

"Asshole. You know I hate needles!"

"Ow. You're digging your nails into my hand! Stop it!"

"I'm scared!"

"Don't take it out on me!"

"..."

"..."

"Want me to kiss it and make it better later?"

"..."

"You've been acting weird lately, Meems. Avoiding me-"

"I'm not avoiding you!"

"Really? What do you call running away as soon as you see me then? Showering me with affection? Tell me what's wrong."

"No."

"Tell me."

"No!"

"Tell me or I'll tickle you!"

"Tai, it's nothing! Alright!"

"Alright. Sheesh."

"..."

"..."

"It't can't be the break-up. That was weeks ago."

"Why won't you let this go?"

"I'm not giving up until you tell me! What did I do?"

"I..I don't know it's stupid. Someone just told me something about you."

"What?"

"I.."

"Tell me. I'm not giving up."

"That...that you're still in love with me."

"..."

"Well? Is it true?"

"Meems-"

"Alright, Ms.Tachikawa. It's time to do you're bloodwork. Let me just get out the butterfly needle and-"

Thud.

"Um...I think she fainted, nurse."

"Damn. Forgot the rule!"

"What rule?"

"Never let the squeemish ones see the needle."
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PostSubject: Re: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Sat May 09, 2009 4:16 am

That is sooo random. XD The "in love" part seems quite sudden though! But kudos to you for making it so clear who's who! It's hard to achieve that with convo-only stories! Good job! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Sat May 09, 2009 4:29 am

Yes, I agree with Potgenie. Convo-only is harder but you did it nicely! Plus it's Michi. I have NO complaints! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Sun May 10, 2009 6:14 pm

Usually reading convo-only makes me want to scratch my eyes out. But I really enjoyed this Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:12 pm

You'd did a great job there! Not once did I even doubt who was speaking at which moment. You really got the rs pinned well.
And the whole scene is just cute; it's quite an original idea.

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PostSubject: Re: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:18 pm

Okay, so I'm going down the list on this section and I noticed the title of a song we listened to in French class. Is this song by Carla Bruni?
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PostSubject: Re: Quelqu'un M'a Dit   Sun Jun 20, 2010 8:02 pm

Do you, by any chance, refer to the Carla Bruni song in the title? (I actually really like Carla Bruni. She's not my style of music at all, but her stuff is really relaxing and good for studying and such.)

I liked it a lot. Convo-only fics usually confuse the heck out of me--but I was able to figure out who was speaking instantly in this one. Excellent job, you kept them wonderfully in-character! Very Happy Excellent work!
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