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PostSubject: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 3:52 am

I decided to ask opinions before I went forward with this one. I like it but the more and more I stare at it... idk. If I do go through with it I won't be writing it until after Lockdown and 1:18 are complete.

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Ken, Yolei, Kari, TK, and Davis are in the car at the drive-in. It's supposed to be couples' night but of course Davis tags along.

It start off where he's babbling on about spending time with Izzy and watching Star Wars. Eventually Yolei gets annoyed because Davis is interrupting makeout time. (Really? Who wouldn't, right?) She tells him to leave and he does... all emotional because he has no one (no it will not be Davis-bashing!).

So he's all alone, walking home in the dark... when suddenly...

Ken wakes up the next morning to a call from Jun frantically asking if he knows where Davis is.

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I think it's safe to assume it would be Suspense, and maybe horror or just drama.

So... what do you think?

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 4:39 am

I know I've said it before... but this has got potential!! I think Suspense has to be my favourite genre now! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:00 am

Watching Star Wars? How can I say no?
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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:03 am

Thanks Genie! You'll be my beta right?

And Matt, that was inspired by you! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 8:49 am

Sure I'll be your beta! Very Happy Can't wait to read it!

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:44 pm

Sounds pretty intriguing, depends what you do with it , of course. But you've captured my interest!

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 9:48 pm

This seems totally worth writing!
Go for it! I want to see what happens next. I'm already in suspense!

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 10:34 pm

I think you should try fit some horror in there... But yeah, like all your ideas it sounds lush!

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:45 pm

I love the ideas! I love you

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:49 pm

Sounds like a plan!

And Aana, I'll add some horror... just for you! I love you

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:29 am

If you need help with morbidity, just ask. ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:28 am

If you need extra gore....
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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:35 am

Lol.

Thanks for the offers. My sick and twisted mind is capable, but should I need help... I'll ask! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Date Night   Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:22 am

You should totally do this!

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